Monday, December 17, 2012

Persuasive Esasy: Stop Bullying by Angelina Priano


       STOP BULLYING

            By Angelina Priano

  Hey!  Don't you think bullying is wrong? Well you're right, bullying is cruel I think bullying should stop, it hurts peoples feelings, It makes people not want to go to school, and it's bad for your health.
      One reason bullying should stop is it hurts peoples feelings. For example: If someone is bullied they will feel really bad.  Another thing is, one time my friend was getting picked on and she felt really left out and she was crying. She said to me that she was really hurt. She said that she wanted to stand up for herself but she couldn't because she was so scared.
    Another reason Bullying should stop is it makes kids not want to go to school. For example: They would get so mad they would think it was going to happen again and not go to school. Another thing is kids don't like to deal with that kind of stuff and they get upset and don't want to go to school.
    My last reason why bullying should stop is it's bad for your health for example: People get so upset they don't eat and they don't sleep and they don't talk it could be really unhealthy especially for kids, and it also holds them back in school because they don't concentrate.
    Well I hope I have convinced you.  Just try to standup for what you believe in and fight for bullying. Because it makes people not want to come to school, it hurts their feelings, and it's bad for your health. So just think about stopping bullying.

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